002 OG: よーし / よーし TL: "Alright." / "Alright...let's do this." ED: this isn't someone getting prepared for anything
OG: こうなった!? TL: "What's going on!?" ED: she's asking about how things came to be this way
OG: いい子ねー鈴仙ちゃん TL: "Aren't you just a good girl, su-san?" ED: wrong honorific, and her name is Reisen
003 OG: 月都製防犯ブザー TL: N/A
OG: ほら純狐 TL: "Hey, Pure Fox." ED: this is a literal translation of her name
OG: あなたが無愛想だから警戒されてるわよ? TL: "Are you being cautious because I'm not the friendliest?" ED: subject/object mixup
OG: 早くもマウント取られてる私を前にしてよく言えますね!? TL: "Oh, coming from someone who's already claimed the high ground in front of me!?" ED: she's talking about being mounted
OG: H₂ell おいしい水素血 TL: Hel, Delicious. ED: missing detail, top and bottom lines
OG: トレンドの便乗が雑!! TL: "Riding on the trend, huh, sloppy!!" ED: sloppy is not the right definition to plug in here
OG: 今日は純狐からお願いがあって来たの TL: "Got a favor to ask from Jinko today." ED: her name is Junko, and subject/object mixup
OG: 純狐話してあげて TL: "Tell me more about Jinko" ED: her name is Junko, and subject/object mixup
etc
Base +39, Videlicet Rex Rgis +7, ImATotalDegenerate +4, PalladKnight46 +6, homura-ayase +6, Slayer Liberator +8, Fofotron +19, letmeon10 +7