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Am I dumb or is the order of the speech bubbles kinda hard to parse

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@Iphroget - Nah, some of it is a bit hard to follow in some of the earlier pages. It should improve later on.

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Part 2 please

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The fuck is this SFW Deviantart shit? If it's not porn, it doesn't belong here. For fuck's sake, there's not even nipples present.

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I love how the friend is ever-so-subtly drawn to be SLIGHTLY more attractive after the MC becomes a girl. Not enough to be jarring or obvious, but enough to highlight the MC's curse-induced sexuality shift.

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If it's a family curse and Winnie is just Andy's dad's girlfriend, why is it affecting him? Did I miss something?

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well presumably we are going to find out Triana is his mom. I originally thought the relationship was going to be, "trent is andy's dads name. making winnie andy's aunt. and we'd find out Winnie was originally an older brother that changed.

Still a lot of inconsistencies. Winnie was very forgetful at first. but now she's become just a nonstop exposition device, remembering everything in detail. She should absolutely have this all written down, and being reading it/remembering it, from a diary/photo album.

if winnie was 19 when Triana changed, while working at hooters. and triana got pregnant right away, +16 for andy, Winnie would be 35 now.

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@cassandra112: Is there any reason Winnie CAN'T be 35? I don't think the curse granting eternal youth is that out of the question.

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@Zerakis Not sure if I brought it up yet, but it's a bloodline related curse that Andy inherited from his mother's side, thus it would explain why Andy is affected but not his father.

@cassandra112 Not an unfounded point on inconsistencies. If I had more pages, I probably could've done something with Winnie reading up on it or having an earpiece that's going over all of the basics. Though she did grow up around the curse, so her having knowledge of it probably shouldn't be too surprising (even with the introduction being forgetful).

Also Winnie was the older sister to Trent and the curse takes hold at 21. I left her age ambiguous but it's not impossible that those affected by the curse age very gracefully.

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@cassandra112 Why are we assuming 16 years for Andy? He's being effected by a curse that is supposed to hit at your 21st birthday.

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