Leave it to Carn to make a simple story a living hell xD, man does he ever do something that doesn't end up in mindfuck?

Base +1, The Noodles -6, kingbradley.jr +7, catmuf -1, MADARA-TAKA2 +5, HXW +7, observer1980 +15, tom20010701 +2

offensive， especially the last page

Base +1, kinzen -7, kingbradley.jr +7, henvaz -8, kaluak -8, TheAwakener -8, Ryu69 +2, an25 -7, echoecho -8, lostseraph7 +1, SiMiK -7, sefra -8, moo21 -6, and 2 more...

"Carn probably saving his best story material for his own works, this plot is as stupid as Sae is in this doujin. "Senpai told me to give my best shot so I'll become a cumdumpster to pay off my debt"?. Yeaaah."

This is what I had said looking at the amagami Sae doujin. Boy, I was wrong.

It's unfortunate, I was looking for some original doujin with busty girls with haircut similar to Tifa but this...oh, well.

EDIT: Retrox, try "Crouching", "Chikakute Tooi Kizuna" and I think one chapter from "Dere Nochi Torare" is safe too, the second chapter.

Base +6, kingbradley.jr +7, TheAwakener -8, observer1980 +15

anyone can seed the torrent?

Base +7, Le Faucheur -5, sefra -8, observer1980 +15, Jomxa -7

He needs to work on his story. This is getting pretty boring and predictable. This is even worse than a PWP.

Base +8, kingbradley.jr +7, Roxbiter +1, MADARA-TAKA2 +5, HXW +7, lostseraph7 +1, observer1980 +15

Sexy on the last page! :D

Base +3, observer1980 +15, Jomxa +7, Azurrblue +1

Lol, she got pregnant after day 1.

Base +3, HXW +7, SiMiK +7, Le Faucheur -5, observer1980 +15, Ensei Sohryu +9, forvea +9, festival fuck +6

https://e-hentai.org/g/446363/3a8d0935e7/

english

Base +7, Le Faucheur +5, observer1980 +15, Ensei Sohryu +9

for who need jap version you can find this in Shinzui Summer Vol.2
https://e-hentai.org/g/290319/fc80ff5775/

Base +9, mdhbysut +12

怎么说呢，夏庵老师这一篇不够味啊

Base +7

正常女生跟本不會跟上去,只能說又是智商下降

Base +6, Azurrblue +1