Right out of the gate you fucked up. In page 1, there's an extra speech bubble after Starfire's first line that's completely empty as if she had more to say. Don't tell me you missed that on accident. You spent who long outlining, drawing, and composting on this and you somehow missed that? Fuck off. And that's just the tip of the iceberg in this garbage comic. Starfire looks like she's made of plastic, her room looks flat and doesn't resemble her room from the show, the dialogue sucks ass (Why he's in my TV?, Catch you was easier than I thought, Don't think you win just yet are some of the worst line's in this shit), the page numbers aren't placed properly, and the whole set up is forced because Starfire could easily mop the floors with Control Freak. If this didn't come out in 2019, I'd swear you used ChatGPT to make this. This is such a lazy, stupidly thought out, and pathetic piece of trash that's just another example of someone not knowing what they're doing making a porn comic with no talent or respect for the source material. Unironically, I could make a better comic than this in my fucking sleep -.-

Base +10, Mordai -7, Ryan24 -6, ChastePumpkin -13, Exgapa -6

@BJay653 Why do you think I'm the artist? I made very clear I'm not.

Base +16, Mordai +7

@EDP I wasn't talking to you -.-

Base +10, Mordai -7, Ryan24 -6, ChastePumpkin -13

@BJay653 Then go to the original artist for your comment, rather than maker it where the only logical recipient is myself.

Base +16, Mordai +7

@EDP Oh get over yourself. Someone else was gonna come in and comment how this was a shit comic regardless if you're the original artist or not. Look at the score. People are clearly not impressed with this lazy as shit quality. And there's a good chance the original artist is gonna see this gallery to see what people think of this shit and if they're smart they'll listen to the feedback and get better at drawing before attempting something like this again. But let's not kid ourselves, they're probably dumb as rocks and will call any legitimate complaint trolling and double down on their shitty art skills -.-

Base +10, Mordai -7, Ryan24 -6, ChastePumpkin -13

@BJay653 If that's your opinion, go to the original artist and tell him, it's more likely they'll see your criticism. Not that I think they'll care for a rude child.

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@EDP you're over here unironically defending this garbage and telling me to take my criticisms to the artist who's only outlet is Patreon where you need to pay him in order to leave comments on his works, nevermind message him about this shit. If anyone's being a child, it's you for not being able to handle other people rightfully calling this comic dogshit -.-

Base +10

@BJay653 I don't defend anyone. I tell you to give the criticism to the author rather than waste time here and to be polite... And laughing at the fact you think his only outlet is Patreon. You REALLY are a child.

Base +16

@EDP No BlueSky, no Discord, no InkBunny, no Newgrounds, no Reddit, not even a MySpace page. Bro only has Patreon and Pixiv if you count that (I don't). Take the L already. This comic is dogshit and the criminally low rating is indicative of that. You're the real child for doubling down on your gross incompetence -.-

Base +10

@BJay653 I take no L, because you just admitted you DO know where to go to talk to him without paying... And yet, you continue coming here. Go on Pixiv and comment there, child.

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@EPD I don't see what difference it makes. Are you gonna tell the next guy who calls this comic dogshit to comment on the artist's Pixiv too? That website is garbage anyway and the fact that people like him still use it is nothing short of pathetic. Take the L. This comic is dogshit, everyone who gave this comic a low rating agrees it's dogshit and you're delusional for unironically defending this dogshit -.-

Base +10

@BJay653 Whatever you say, son. Now, go and talk to him where you know you can do so, or forever hold your peace.

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@EDP No. I left Pixiv years ago due to their dogshit policy changes. I'm not making another account just tell some guy his comic sucks ass. You're once again further proving yourself to be an insecure whiny bitch for getting on my case for rightfully calling this comic dogshit when it has a criminally low score. If I didn't say something, someone else would've come in and said something. Simple. The fact that you're still surprised by negative comments is wild. It's the Internet. Nobody gives a fuck about your fucking feewings getting hurt, you whiny little motherfucker -.-

Base +10

@BJay653 Whatever you say, child. Though it's not me who's whining to someone who just takes the pages of a comic from Pixiv and puts them here for GP and doesn't care except that his rambles are funny rather than go and complain to someone who cares.

Base +16

@EDP this all could've been avoided had you simply not responded to my initial comment in the first place. You could've just accepted someone would find this comic dogshit and actually put in the effort to explain why it's dogshit instead of simply going "this must've been made with AI" or "I could do better than that." But no, you had to get on your high horse and tell me not to comment here because you'd rather have the artist you're defending get negative feedback on his profile rather than you recieving it on his behalf despite already uploading his shit on his behalf. You're much more of a child in this case for being surprised that the dogshit comic you uploaded was rightfully called dogshit -.-

Base +10

@BJay653 No. I just told you that making such comments here was useless and pointed out I'm not the artist (I was under the impression you thought of). YOU doubled down on insulting him here and me, while I tried to send you on the correct place and now I'm just having a laugh.

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@EDP Telling someone where they can/can't comment is useless because nobody online likes being told what to do. And I never gave a shit whether or not you were the artist. I was sharing my piece on how dogshit this comic was then you got butthurt and told me to comment on the original artist's page. When I told you negative comments like mine were inevitable given the low rating, you retaliated by calling me a child. No shit I insulted you, you arrogant, self-centered narcissist. You refuse to look inward and accept that there are people online who don't take kindly to dogshit comics and you insult and belittled me first by calling me a child. You've been doubling down on your gross incompetence when it's clear you're fighting a losing battle -.-

Base +10

@BJay653 Amazing. Everything you said is wrong. I only told you that if you wanted the artist to know your opinion you should do so somewhere else. You were rude, and got butthurt when I pointed that out. I called you a child for the rudeness, and then you started insulting me for it - something I didn't even notice because of your constant rudeness. And I've not doubling down on a losing battle - I'm just having a laugh about YOU picking a fight with me... And losing by your own hand when I'm not even fighting back.
Listen, this is my gallery so I can't leave unless I want to disown it, and I don't want to. But you can end this anytime simply by stopping this, and maybe, just maybe, go and comment on Pixiv where the author can know your opinion. That would be the mature thing to do, give your opinions to someone who cares.

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@EDP there you go again with your doubling down. Be real, you honestly think it was polite to say "don't comment on my gallery, go to the original artist's page instead?" Telling someone where they can/can't comment on a website that has an open comment section for users is rude and childish. You don't get to dictate who can comment on your gallery. You're not a mod and this isn't your personal website or a profile where you're able to moderate ypur own comment section. I'm not backing down from a situation where I'm clearly right and you're clearly in the wrong. The actual mature thing to do would be for you do realize you uploaded a dogshit comic and let it go. You could've ended this conversation days ago by simply not replying. But no, you wanted to assert dominance as if the world revolves around you and tell me not to comment on your gallery. Why don't you take your own advice, be mature and shut the fuck up? I comment wherever the fuck I want. Unless a mod comes in and nukes the comment section because they find both of us that annoying, I'm not gonna stop calling you out on your childish bullshit -.-

Base +10

@BJay653 But you aren't calling me out on anything. You are just doubling down on YOUR OWN childishness and whining at someone who is just amused. Tell me, did you already try your thing at the author and get destroyed for your rudeness? Just curious.

Base +16