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FANZA version, different censorship than: https://e-hentai.org/g/4103567/5bc8924af7/

終於完成了嗎?!

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参加剣道部 弓道部的JK 基本等于母猪

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禅院真希大概也算是剑道jk罢（

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好家伙，多少年了终于完成了？

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這樣算是完結灑花了嗎 恭喜

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可以说除了本子完整版结尾的加笔，我们在苦等间已经把能看的都看完了。

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The ending of the Fanbox version, clocking at 66 pages after almost 4 years, showed Kaori was on the final moments of her "dealing" with Yuusuke, but it wasn't painted as a triumphant closure, Kaori had shown clear signs that she was willingly falling for Yuusuke's grip, automatically so as Kaori's mind and actions betray each other, she thinks that her hell is about to end but Keade is unknowingly acting in absolute sexual bliss, taking the initiative to service him, to the point Yuusuke notices it and brings this peculiarly to Kaori's face, bragging about it, can't she tell how much she is into this now? Yuusuke proudly summarized he technically won this, even if is about to end.

Now that this is over, Kaori rushes late to her date, Takumi being completely unaware still of everything that transpired was a little worried about Kaori being late, but once she gets there Takumi is relieved and Kaede easily makes an excuse for it, in her mind Kaori thinks all is over now, she can resume her love life with Takumi just fine, but this ending is clearly portrayed in a ominous light, showing how much Kaori's body has been taken by Yuusuke, what might be over is something else Kaori is afraid to admit...

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Such an obvious hanging ending for the Fanbox version likely was made to make the readers anticipate the commercial release on Fanza that contains an After Story.
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Here it is, the Extra Pages made available for the commercial release; Kaori proceeded on her date with Takumi, afterwards they book a hotel and are about to have some love making, Takumi is anticipating after so long, while Kaori really is glad to reunite with her boyfriend after so long, finally she will erase Yuusuke from her mind! Huh? Wait a minute, Kaori looks at Takumi's dick in bewilderment, was his size always like this? No, maybe if she connects with him just right it will feel good, for sure... it isn't quite the same? Takumi seems to be enjoying it, so it should be good, right?

Kaori can't help but be honest about what is eating her from the inside, sex with Takumi didn't feel good at all, and what's more, that dastardly Yuusuke sent her message teasing her about their time, but Yuusuke tries to sound like he did good on his part, claiming to have deleted their little material together, just acting like this is goodbye message, but he leaves a bait, saying Kaori can still contact him anytime if she wishes...

Kaori could only feel jealousy when looking at herself through the screen, like she is looking at something she can no longer have even though she should be glad to be free and back with Takumi... one month later Kaori is being handled like the fuck toy she wishes to be, by Yuusuke of course, he smugly unloads on Kaori how she willingly contacted him despite he going about his life without ever bothering her again, was Takumi's dick that bad? Kaori pleads Yuusuke not to say such things, but he keeps taking jabs, be honest senpai! YES! Kaori finally admitted, she loves strong cocks, Kaori loves Takumi but he can't satisfy her anymore!

Good girl, Yuusuke proudly and confidently tells Kaori she is at his back and calls now, she better come running for him whenever and wherever he contacts her, got it!? Doesn't matter if she is Takumi's girlfriend, Kaori is Yuusuke's cock sleeve from now on! First order of the day is to clean the she loves so much now that they are done, Kaori can only muster in her thoughts a small apology to Takumi, THE END.
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Absolutely zero surprise with this conclusion four years later, this Epilogue seems more like missing finale pages than an "After Story" of sorts, did you like it? I wonder what the day-one Fanbox subscribers who stuck around till now think, did you double dip with this comercial release?

Look at the cute extra illustration at the very end, Kaori pleasing Takumi with "love", then being handled by Yuusuke with "grit".

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Holy crap, I pity those fanbox slaves. Author gave them the most lazy average ending even for NTR standards.

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这懒鬼作者

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！终于完结了吗

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整整四年，第一次看还是22年夏天，内容刚到P27女主给黄毛口的那页，中间是不是过来看看更新情况，结果有时候半年都不见更新一页，四年过去了，可算把完整版给等到了，上一个还是桂井老贼的九樱

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@Goukenimaru 4 years is crazy, meanwhile dramus spent less than that to churn out his entire Abukano series wich currently consists of chapter 1,2 and 0, chapter 1 and 2 combined has nearly 300 pages and the filler chapter 0 he made a while ago even has 70+ pages, and hes currently making chapter 3 wich he might just barely pop out before that 4 year mark lmao, insane

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看不懂日文，但有点意犹未尽之感。这就完了啊

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5 years .... lul
the real cuck its you ... the viewer

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Those Fanbox subscribers got cucked hard man lol

That epilogue is so generic and lazy. The art is easily the best thing about all of this

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有没有大佬跑ai用这种的 分享一下

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5 years to finish this. the same amount of time to made Gundam Hathaway 2 movie.

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We got Yozo to finish his doujin before GTA 6.

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Well like @gntz said and like we were already saying while the work was still in progress, the real cucks in this story are the subscribers lol

There isn’t really much to complain about it cuz of the only good thing, as is often the case with most netorare works, is the art and only the art. But was it really worth waiting 4 or 5 years for around sixty pages of a plot we’ve seen over and over again? As @Wilfriback mention.. I don’t think so..

Ngl, if you’re just fapping to it in a language you don’t understand, maybe it’s “fine.” But once you actually read it in English, it just becomes an intellectual torture session… except for the art, as I said before.

I still have to give Kaedeko credit for scamming his subscribers for years while they basically funded his loli project lmao.

Ofc, that’s just my subjective opinion. If you enjoyed it, that’s perfectly fine. But like @BamBlackStar said, there are other authors and artists who are far more active and have much better writing in ntr terms..

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Everything about this work is generic. And the art is competent not good. It really did boggle the mind seeing people praising this generic NTR Template #3.

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That fucking "After Story" is so half-assed that it cucked the Fanbox subscribers. Imagine subscribing every month for 5 years, supporting this mangaka and keeping updated on the project only to know the "After Story" pages is just 8 pages long. At least add 20 more pages man.

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Crowdfunding and its consequences have been a disaster for the human race.

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Artists like Shayo in the same amount of time have done more than 1k pages of doujin content if we combine all of the works he has made in five years. There's no excuse for being this lazy. The real cucks are the fanbox and fantia subscribers.

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People spent 4 years just for a have your cake and eat it too situation? That's crazy

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完结撒花！

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