WARNING: THIS IS A MACHINE TRANSLATION

Some or all of the text/story may be different than the original author's intention

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This translation was done with the original story in mind.

the previous ones
https://e-hentai.org/g/488537/6af2f2ee9e/

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The old gallery at https://e-hentai.org/g/488537/6af2f2ee9e/ has some pertinent comments

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Pedobear will slaughter U because the shit U dare to write...

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As an example, here's how I would have translated pages 8 & 9:

<08>
If I wasn't a woman--
Would I too--

<09>
Would I too--
Have embraced Silk like this--
Have polluted Silk like this--

Compare this to your version, and you should be able to see why your "translation" is considered lacking.

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If you don't like being truthful about this gallery, you can go drown yourself in a 6-inch puddle of donkey urine. Elitist sacks of shit deserve that kind of thing 8)

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