Tried to take a stab at translating again. It, like the last one, might not be 100% accurate. Nonetheless enjoy.

Good shit, thanks for the translation. These aren't futas though.

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Awesome thanks.

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Did you use another raw? Why is it double the size of the original raw?

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So tired of seeing the futa/shemale semantics comments on every new doujin.

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Thanks for the effort, but you still have a lot to learn. Try using punctuation more aropiately. By the way, are you a native English speaker? Because at times it doesn't look like it.

Still, you did a good job, or at least I think it is, I don't speak Japanese so I can't tell how accurate your translation is. But compared to some of the horrendous attempts I've seen at this site, it almost looks like a professional job...

Still, if someone can make another translation, to compare the two, it would be greatly appreciated.

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@XxMonarchxX
Work on your typesetting. The text is too big, speech shouldn't go outside the bubbles unless there's no way for it to fit. Furthermore, the PNG is bloated here. Use http://psydk.org/pngoptimizer to reduce file size without losing quality. If you want, send me a PM and I can help you with re-editing this work: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?act=Msg&CODE=4&MID=631161

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@sheruu

It's way better than someone downvoting this gallery for being a futa/shemale/trapfuck doujin.

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@ichirohiroku yeah I used the raw from the original gallery, but in photoshop it was indexed. I should have just worked with it instead of re-pasting it into a new window before editing it, if that would even help the file size. chaos-x mentioned pngoptimizer, so I'll try it if I work on something new I like that hasn't received a translation.

@xenoguy I know I have to work on it more as my knowledge on using moonspeak is pretty novice. I'm a native English speaker, so for me to give poor sentence structure in any way, I apologize man. I just wanted to translate this since I liked the doujin. The last translation I did, no one translated that piece in like ages so I did a favor, albeit again, not a perfect job. I'm sure once we see what the majority considers a cleaner job, I can learn from it as there were some terms (probably slang) that I didn't quite get even after doing research.

@chaos-x Yeah, I gotta work on that. I get scared since I don't want text to be too small or big. As much as I appreciate the offer of help on this job, I'm probably gonna leave it as is. I'll keep you in mind though if I decide to work on a new translation.

@ruukasu I know. I just took the tags from the original raw doujin that was posted here. To be honest though, it doesn't matter what it is. Liked it so much I wanted to figure out what they were saying but translating a work really kills the appeal of it to the person doing it once it's done :(

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@XxMonarchxX
Then I hope you won't be mind if I redo the typesetting and upload the work myself. Maybe have N04h crosscheck the translation for errors too.

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@chaos-x not at all dude. Go for it. I can learn that way.

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Chicks with dicks / Guys with tits look so much sexier in Hentai than in real world

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Chinbotsu is making an official translation if you guys are interested https://www.patreon.com/Chinbotsu?ty=h

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@sosukedrake Awesome. thanks for the info.

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How is this prostitution when they're just giving him some compensation for the late food, man

...I think they just made it worse, everything's gonna be cold now.

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horishet. thanks

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@C h a n
I thought the same exact thing when I was translating it. He's gotta heat it up again, or hope they compensate him for his cold food too.

@jplshejeser no doubt dude.

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Gotta say, this guy is super lucky.

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@XxMonarchxX Thanks for the translation, man!

Are you interested in trying out other Chinbotsu stuff? His second tankobon is out and only one chapter has been translated. https://e-hentai.org/g/844535/31d247ba58/

I'm sure us futa lovers would love to at least see some of it translated.

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@ChibiRobo
I'm definitely a futa lover that's for sure. I'll consider it. Though I can't make any promises since college hits me pretty hard. If I can make time, you might see a chapter or two from me.

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New version out: https://e-hentai.org/g/898826/3c41f1544f/

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check out @chaos-x translation.
definitely more solid.

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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/889899/44977f4386/
ENG: https://e-hentai.org/g/896404/03c71ace2b/ (you are here)
ENG: https://e-hentai.org/g/898826/3c41f1544f/
ESP: https://e-hentai.org/g/898351/36fc20a9b7/
RUS: https://e-hentai.org/g/960150/18abb428e5/
RUS: https://e-hentai.org/g/1233599/3b083b656a/
BRA: https://e-hentai.org/g/1220451/e61eb5dc65/
CHN: https://e-hentai.org/g/1292645/48091dcec5/

Last edited on 29 September 2018, 01:55.

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