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[581] Cool Bishoujo Remodeling Ch1-4 [English]

[581] クール美少女改造【1】-【4】[英訳]

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Posted:2021-08-01 08:55
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[581] Cool Bishoujo Remodeling Ch1-23 [English], added 2022-11-06 09:56
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Posted on 01 August 2021, 08:55 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Uploader Comment
The artist's pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/49287
【1】Cool Bishoujo Remodeling: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/86623575
【2】Cool Bishoujo Remodeling・Older Sister Edition: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/86624243
【3】Cool Bishoujo Remodeling・Coworkers ■ Classmates Edition: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/86624730
【4】Cool Bishoujo Remodeling・Coworkers ■ Classmates Remodeling Edition: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/86628619

Please support the artist (581(ごはい)) if you can. This is also requested by けー. Please support him too. https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/1133210

I used DeepL etc. to translate this while making sure it is coherent and keeping to the original work. There were some words I didn't think were translated properly. For example 素体 translated as base body/ original body. 機 would translate to machines/units/devices. For page 14, the top middle box's kanji was different (体型 vs 体格) so I used "Physique" instead of "body type". this is also the case in later chapters. Please, if there's any corrections I need to make, tell me and I'll verify and change it.

2021-08-01 Edit: I changed "device" to "machine body" for consistency in page 9.

Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Posted on 08 June 2021, 11:08 by:   Ficfactor    PM
Score +114
You're a hero for arranging all of these.
Posted on 08 June 2021, 11:30 by:   王♂哲学    PM
Score +22
血肉苦弱,机械飞升
Posted on 08 June 2021, 12:59 by:   Ez-Burning    PM
Score +81
Wow, this is so evil if you think about it for a sec.
Posted on 08 June 2021, 14:55 by:   Ghalen    PM
Score +73
Wonder how many missing person report the police get?
Posted on 08 June 2021, 15:29 by:   John Abbany    PM
Score +47
@Ghalen
I mean according to 7 & 12 it seems like the robot forms can mimic their past human forms so... I'm guessing there's nothing noticeable and they'd just be activated as sex robots like sleeper agents or something.
Posted on 08 June 2021, 17:11 by:   H0R0    PM
Score +18
p.9
at first i thought something weird with the translation, the older sis reg the younger sis as "i'm your younger sis = you're my older sis" while the younger sis reg the older sis as "you're my younger sis = i'm your older sis", checked the raw, thought author had brain fart lol
but after looked at the tag on pixiv, the author was intentional reversed their role.

the story is older sis found younger sister captured but younger sis is already remodel so younger sis captured older sis, because younger sis was remodel first she is now reg as "older sister" while older sis was captured then remodel later she is now reg as "younger sis"
Posted on 08 June 2021, 18:14 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +25
@H0R0

That's what I thought too until I translated the description. Translated in deepl, it says: "The older sister comes to rescue the trapped younger sister, but the younger sister, who has already been remodeled, restrains the older sister and is remodeled into a sexaroid like the younger sister. The younger sister, who was modified first, is recognized and registered as the "older sister" and the older sister, who was modified later, as the "younger sister"."
Posted on 08 June 2021, 20:42 by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +22
I guess Shouko was eligible after all...
Posted on 09 June 2021, 05:06 by:   kanzato    PM
Score +6
You are a true hero!
Posted on 10 September 2021, 12:38 by:   Frogmonster    PM
Score -4
What's more evil is the idiot poster didn't just combine them into a single gallery, but insisted on spamming the site with a bunch of 3-10 image galleries.
Posted on 27 October 2021, 03:02 by:   sectorunit888    PM
Score +13
Thanks for another based translation.
Posted on 27 October 2021, 05:18 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +13
@sectorunit888

Thanks. I didn't want to do a redraw of the words in the title cards so I did the next best thing.
Posted on 02 November 2021, 21:20 by:   sectorunit888    PM
Score +7
Will you also translate the TSF Sexaroid one as well?
Posted on 02 November 2021, 22:27 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +11
@sectorunit888

Sure! Although I'm a bit worried about these two recent ones. I hope it's fine to post it. 581-san didn't put a certain tag in his pixiv gallery so I'm assuming it's fine.
Posted on 02 November 2021, 23:36 by:   sectorunit888    PM
Score +7
@VermillionFox162
What certain tags?
Posted on 03 November 2021, 00:49 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +11
@sectorunit888
in ch18, the male looks young, so i'm a bit worried about it. I'll just assume he's as old as Ayame because the chapter's pixiv doesn't tag him as "too young" or the like.
Last edited on 03 November 2021, 12:05.
Posted on 03 November 2021, 02:07 by:   sectorunit888    PM
Score +7
@VermillionFox162

I see, so it's THAT tag, huh? Well, rest assured on the TSF Sexaroid since it's most likely a teenager so, that tag doesn't apply. Also the friend who turned him into one can also be seen as around the same age.
Posted on 04 November 2021, 02:59 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +11
@sectorunit888

I just hope there's no problems. I was hesitant on posting/translating the recent chapter for various reasons. I only did that one for completion's sake. I also hope that that didn't sound too crass or rude or anything. I'm just very worried.
Last edited on 04 November 2021, 07:29.
Posted on 14 January 2022, 02:47 by:   Bfreedle    PM
Score +5
Man I just learned of this series and hope it has some kind of happy end but your translating and putting it together is great and so much appreciated. Thank you for the great effort and work!
Posted on 15 January 2022, 09:14 by:   d1puck1t    PM
Score +6
I hope more of 581's work gets translated.

Thanks very much.
Posted on 27 January 2022, 09:45 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +14
@Bfreedle @d1puck1t

Thanks for the comment. It means quite a lot. I'm trying to find time for working on them but I suddenly got very busy. I'm very sorry I can't post as fast as I had before but I'm getting as much done as I can with the amount of time I can scrounge up. With chapter 13.5 and 19, I have a partial translation done which I need to clean up and make sure it's right. I also have the text removed so I can put the text in afterwards. I also have the extra pic that the 581 put on his twitter translated. I might post it here if it's a good idea. Again, I apologize for not having this done quick enough.
Posted on 31 January 2022, 09:55 by:   d1puck1t    PM
Score +13
Your hard work is extremely appreciated.
Posted on 15 March 2022, 08:43 by:   sectorunit888    PM
Score +14
The man and the legend is back baby! Also a discord group for my fellow robotization/mechanization fetishist: discord.gg/9D3HnZjzus
Posted on 15 March 2022, 09:35 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +24
@sectorunit888

I don't know if i'm "back" honestly (I don't really know if I actually left at all). All I did was post Stem Cell's translations to this gallery. I started working on mine a while ago but due to real life obligations, I couldn't complete it as fast as before. I'm still planning on finishing my translation of 13.5 and 19. 13.5 was as done as I could get it and for 19, I just needed to typeset and proofread. I feel, though, that it's rude to Stem Cell if I posted them, so unless he says otherwise, I'll leave it like this. His translations for 581-san's work are quite similar to how I would do it (with some variations) so I'm very grateful. I still plan on doing future Cool Bishoujo chapters, but I have no time to do any others. If this sounded rude in anyway to anybody, It wasn't meant to be. @Stem Cell if you read this, I hope you do continue translating. I personally think they're great. I wouldn't have translated the sound effects like you did in that one zombie doujin. That one was a good read.
Last edited on 16 March 2022, 09:38.
Posted on 23 May 2022, 06:30 by:   sectorunit888    PM
Score +14
Welcome back and thanks for the translation man!
Posted on 23 May 2022, 06:34 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +13
@sectorunit888
Thanks! I can get this one done if you want: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/98151131
Posted on 27 May 2022, 00:31 by:   Muhladin    PM
Score +6
Not bad, thanks
Posted on 29 May 2022, 03:52 by:   Rin Tohsaka    PM
Score +11
Minor suggestion for the changelog that you include in your first comment - maybe include a mention of which page number the new update begins at?
Posted on 30 May 2022, 07:29 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +12
@Rin Tohsaka

I didn't think about that! Ok, will do it in the future!

edit: I'll still put the page numbers in the update section but I just remembered I linked the chapters in the gallery discription. Just click the bold words to go to the desired chapter. :)
Last edited on 01 June 2022, 07:04.
Posted on 02 June 2022, 17:02 by:   Arcalive-Alive    PM
Score +12
I'm a Korean translator. Do you have a non-text image? I'm asking because the background of the place where the sentence is located is neat. My photoshop skills are so low that it is hard to translate...
Posted on 03 June 2022, 09:26 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +15
@Arcalive-Alive
I posted them here: discord.gg/9D3HnZjzus hopefully 581-san doesn't mind.
Posted on 03 June 2022, 14:58 by:   Arcalive-Alive    PM
Score +4
@VermillionFox162 I checked. Thank you.
Posted on 13 July 2022, 01:32 by:   Ravonies    PM
Score +26
Is this ongoing?
Posted on 24 July 2022, 10:21 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +21
@Ravonies
It seems that as long as K-san commissions it and if 581-san accepts them, there'll be more.
Posted on 29 July 2022, 16:04 by:   幻空尊者    PM
Score +5
射爆啊,好兄弟们,太对XP了!!
Last edited on 15 January 2023, 19:01.
Posted on 06 November 2022, 23:36 by:   auron7777    PM
Score +6
The amount of work you put into these translations is insane. Good job!
Posted on 07 November 2022, 10:02 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +8
@auron7777
Thanks! I get a lot of help from the guys at discord.gg/9D3HnZjzus and 581-san.
Posted on 12 January 2023, 00:17 by:   snakecomic    PM
Score +6
Mediafire mirror for the original [581] Cool Bishoujo Remodeling Ch1-23 [English] file: https://www.mediafire.com/file/o1f3x6b4jniwe0f
Posted on 22 April 2023, 16:33 by:   flannan    PM
Score +28
With the level of technology involved, and rebuilding their bodies into robots... was there any point to kidnapping them in the first place?
Looks like it would be easier to just scan the originals and make copies.
Posted on 21 September 2023, 14:26 by:   kitkaty01    PM
Score +15
Matsuyuki on pg. 45 got done dirty
Posted on 21 September 2023, 14:37 by:   Red 255    PM
Score +7
considering how much gets replaced, no. theres not much remodeling done. all the internals are replaced with synthetic, not even sure they keep much of the skin.

there is SOME connection between the organic brain and the body even if the brain is in storage. so I guess its like for people who want to have sex with a robot, but need to sacrifice a person's soul for their fetish. because the brain is still connected thru its soul. but yeah pretty sure nearly 100% synthetic.
Posted on 22 September 2023, 01:08 by:   Ninjack108    PM
Score +42
@kitkaty01 I think that’s her at 206 so relatively speaking she might have gotten the best deal out of this
Posted on 11 January 2024, 06:03 by:   Devilot109    PM
Score +7
{Rei} This is veries goals. Rei wants to be made into a cutes robo-girl, tooo! *Nodnods, mewwwws!*
Posted on 14 February 2024, 06:25 by:   ChronicLogic    PM
Score +32
Some of these conversions are so extreme like 99% cybernetics and only 1% organic tissue. Hell some of them have an actual AI personality installed that completely overrides the actual human consciousness. Might as well just build sexbots.
That girl that got her brain put in storage was absolutely ridiculously, the bad guys literally built a mechanical sexbot and there's literally no parts of the original girl in that sexbot, not even her conscious. They just mutilated a girl for no reason.
Posted on 30 April 2024, 11:15 by:   AhKai    PM
Score +17
Erika happy ending QwQ
Posted on 01 May 2024, 00:03 by:   Reize1    PM
Score +27
I love the artwork and am grateful for the translation but I really do not understand the universe. How much of their original body is even left after the conversion? If their brain is a computer at this point then when their original personality is activated it's not really them at all but just a simulation. What happened to their real brain? Why is there a need to sacrifice a girl if they can recreate a human mind on a machine so easily? In my opinion they should either keep the organic brain and add cybernetics to it or just create a new artificial girl using brain scans. This way seems wasteful. Unless they are building multiple copies of the same girl using the original brain in storage as a template? That would make slightly more sense but it still seems like they could accomplish the same thing with brain scans. I am way too invested in this. Going to touch grass now.
Posted on 01 May 2024, 01:03 by:   Rann    PM
Score +21
Bros in here reviewing this stuff like they thought it was an Asimov story and they were just really shocked to discover that it's actually about someone's fetish pft
Posted on 01 May 2024, 03:05 by:   Reize1    PM
Score +27
That reminds me in Forward the Foundation Asimov gave his main character self insert a robot waifu. Man was ahead of his time.

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