Seeing as no one else fixed the dumpster fire that is the "English translation" I took it upon myself to do so.

Just the text itself took me long enough to do that I decided it would not be feasible for me to do all of the SFX in this by myself.
Also I don't believe I could've done a good enough job at them anyways so it was better for me to leave it alone entirely.

There was a bit of redrawing that I had to do but otherwise it was very minimal amounts. I tried my best to at the very least not have anything stick out like a sore thumb. If there's any glaring issues or mistakes please leave a comment down below.

Source: https://e-hentai.org/s/0e76503dfc/1950480-142
Comic Hotmilk 2021-08: pg 142 - 181

Also, if you have any requests or want to commission me
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Good translation but I doubt you can do anything about the obscene amount of fluids drawn into the comic. I'm talking about the sweaty scenes that are so over exaggerated that they bodies look like they are melting lol. Still, I won't find good cumflation stuff other than this

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Yea the author has a weird fixation on excessive amount of fluid. I almost feel like he should just do slime girls instead lol

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@Kyuume will you translate the other one or were you only going to fix the translation for his one?

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@Pupbit
Yeah I am, you can probably expect the next chapter within the next week / next few days depending on how long it takes me but I am planning to do it.
I just wanted to fix this one first because the previously mentioned "English translation" is not a translation at all but a complete nonsensical rewrite.

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